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+ | == So elegant! == | ||
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+ | Mr Jason, good job for your visualization. I benefit a lot from it. Here show some of my humble suggestions: | ||
+ | *For the Air Plume Model, I personally think the triangle should be reverse to track the source of the pollution by a wider range. | ||
+ | *For multiple value list of Monitor, consider using multiple dropdown list to spare more space for other control panels. | ||
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+ | *Overall, it's an excellent job. Questions have been clearly solved and there are enough interactive techniques to let user understand your analysis better. | ||
+ | *Hope to see your final version! :) | ||
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+ | --[[User:Yrzhang.2016|Yrzhang.2016]] ([[User talk:Yrzhang.2016|talk]]) 21:17, 3 July 2017 (SGT) | ||
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+ | Hi Jason, | ||
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+ | Very nice use of the Tableau story to highlight your investigative journey. Some points couple of points for your consideration: | ||
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+ | Aesthetics: | ||
+ | * Very good use of annotations, tooltips and highlights to show the anomalies in chemical readings. | ||
+ | * Consider using lighter colors in Q3 to display the influence area of sensors in your Air Plume model. Since the background color of the map is black, a lighter color might provide a better contrast to show the wind area covered by each sensor. | ||
+ | * For the hour-based trellis charts, consider renaming header labels from DateTime to something more meaningful like "Hours of the day". | ||
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+ | Clarity: | ||
+ | * Nice consistency with the usage of trellis line graph to draw comparisons in readings across sensors for different time periods. | ||
+ | * If its possible, consider providing an option to select all months and/or all chemicals in your interactive single-list filters for the time-based trellis visualizations. The targeted audience might want to look at an overall picture before drilling-down to every chemical and every month. | ||
+ | * Very creative background to showcase the Windrose model. Consider adjusting the height in the Air Plume model to avoid scrollbars or use multi-select dropdowns instead of multi-select list boxes. | ||
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+ | Great job in creatively answering the VAST question with such intricate details! | ||
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+ | --[[User:Angads.2016|Angads.2016]] ([[User talk:Angads.2016|talk]]) 22:21, 13 July 2017 (SGT) |
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Thanks!
So elegant!
Mr Jason, good job for your visualization. I benefit a lot from it. Here show some of my humble suggestions:
- For the Air Plume Model, I personally think the triangle should be reverse to track the source of the pollution by a wider range.
- For multiple value list of Monitor, consider using multiple dropdown list to spare more space for other control panels.
- Overall, it's an excellent job. Questions have been clearly solved and there are enough interactive techniques to let user understand your analysis better.
- Hope to see your final version! :)
--Yrzhang.2016 (talk) 21:17, 3 July 2017 (SGT)
Hi Jason,
Very nice use of the Tableau story to highlight your investigative journey. Some points couple of points for your consideration:
Aesthetics:
- Very good use of annotations, tooltips and highlights to show the anomalies in chemical readings.
- Consider using lighter colors in Q3 to display the influence area of sensors in your Air Plume model. Since the background color of the map is black, a lighter color might provide a better contrast to show the wind area covered by each sensor.
- For the hour-based trellis charts, consider renaming header labels from DateTime to something more meaningful like "Hours of the day".
Clarity:
- Nice consistency with the usage of trellis line graph to draw comparisons in readings across sensors for different time periods.
- If its possible, consider providing an option to select all months and/or all chemicals in your interactive single-list filters for the time-based trellis visualizations. The targeted audience might want to look at an overall picture before drilling-down to every chemical and every month.
- Very creative background to showcase the Windrose model. Consider adjusting the height in the Air Plume model to avoid scrollbars or use multi-select dropdowns instead of multi-select list boxes.
Great job in creatively answering the VAST question with such intricate details!
--Angads.2016 (talk) 22:21, 13 July 2017 (SGT)