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Please write down your valuable feedback here:
Hi Yale, very impressive piece of work! Just a couple of points I have to make below for your consideration.
Clarity
- Some lead-in for your figures will be probably useful. Many people including myself may be unfamiliar with the spectral bands etc.
- No titles for your figures
- You may want to do a peaks and troughs analysis by adding in some annotations in your line graph
- Your y-axis for the line graph is starting at 110 which may mislead the audience
Aesthetics
- Good usage of animations but the speed can probably be tuned slower and you may want to include that in your answers section instead.
- Good color choices to distinguish the different geographical features
--Jason.ong.2016 (talk) 11:30, 14 July 2017 (SGT)