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+ | <p>Hi Yale, very impressive piece of work! Just a couple of points I have to make below for your consideration.<br> | ||
+ | Clarity<br> | ||
+ | # Some lead-in for your figures will be probably useful. Many people including myself may be unfamiliar with the spectral bands etc.<br> | ||
+ | # No titles for your figures<br> | ||
+ | # You may want to do a peaks and troughs analysis by adding in some annotations in your line graph | ||
+ | # Your y-axis for the line graph is starting at 110 which may mislead the audience | ||
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+ | Aesthetics<br> | ||
+ | # Good usage of animations but the speed can probably be tuned slower and you may want to include that in your answers section instead. | ||
+ | # Good color choices to distinguish the different geographical features | ||
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+ | --[[User:Jason.ong.2016|Jason.ong.2016]] ([[User talk:Jason.ong.2016|talk]]) 11:30, 14 July 2017 (SGT) |
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Please write down your valuable feedback here:
Hi Yale, very impressive piece of work! Just a couple of points I have to make below for your consideration.
Clarity
- Some lead-in for your figures will be probably useful. Many people including myself may be unfamiliar with the spectral bands etc.
- No titles for your figures
- You may want to do a peaks and troughs analysis by adding in some annotations in your line graph
- Your y-axis for the line graph is starting at 110 which may mislead the audience
Aesthetics
- Good usage of animations but the speed can probably be tuned slower and you may want to include that in your answers section instead.
- Good color choices to distinguish the different geographical features
--Jason.ong.2016 (talk) 11:30, 14 July 2017 (SGT)