ISSS608 2016-17 T3 Assign CHEN YINJUE Peer Comment

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Bird.jpg VAST Challenge 2017 : Help Rose-Crested Blue Pipit

Introduction

Data Preparation

Visualization & Insights

Conclusion

Comment

Comment

Hi friends, all your comments are most welcome and appreciated, except evil prof's. Thank you!


Hi Yinjue,

Very useful findings especially the unusual pattern. However, the visualization interaction need to be improved.

Xu Yue

Hi, Yinjue
It is enjoyable to read through your analysis work. I learn a lot from the way you construct your assignment, particularly the detailed process for producing the sunburst graph in Tableau. However, I have the following subrggestions that hopefully are useful in further improving your work:
Aesthetics

  • The overall visualization design is a bit plain. You mainly used line graphs and calendar views to display the patterns. I am wondering if you can further explore other visualization graphs to increase your visualization variety, as well as discover more insights.
  • I noticed that most of your graphs do not have legends attached, which makes it a bit difficult to understand the delivered messages, particularly for those who do not have background knowledge.

Clarity

  • The story line is not quite clear as there is no clear distinguish between daily and multiple days patterns. I am wondering if you can re-construe your work according to the sequence of Daily, multiple day and suspect patterns, which might be easier to follow.
  • Look forward to seeing your workbook to find out more about the story and interactivity

It is really enjoyable to read through your work. I can see you have put lots of efforts into it. Good work.

Best Regards
Yunna