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Yunna Wei - ISSS608 Visual Analytics and Applications_Assignment1

Introduction

Data Preparation

Overview Exploration

Pattern Detectoin

Interactive Visualization

Comments

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Hi Yunna,
It has been such a joy working with you on this assignment. Please see my comments below, and you are very welcome to comment on my work!
Aesthetic:

1. I really like the presentation of sunburst diagram. But I do believe that there are more friendly way to present the interactivities, for example, I think check box are more suitable than drop-down in this case, and maybe a time interval slider would make the filtering easier.
2. The tableau workbook well demonstrates the investigation logic and it's very easy to follow! I think better formatting would make it more attractive though. For example, the overlapping of points and label on "point overview" is distracting.