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Your comments are most welcome and valuable. Please leave them here:<br> | Your comments are most welcome and valuable. Please leave them here:<br> | ||
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| − | <font style="font-family:Calibri;">Hi Yunna,<br> | + | <font style="font-family:Calibri;">Hi Yunna,<br> Lovely work and interesting interpretation! Please allow me to share my opinions below.<br> |
<b>Aesthetic:</b><br> | <b>Aesthetic:</b><br> | ||
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<li>I really like the presentation of sunburst diagram. But I do believe that there are more friendly way to present the interactivities, for example, I think check box are more suitable than drop-down in this case, and maybe a time interval slider would make the filtering easier.</li> | <li>I really like the presentation of sunburst diagram. But I do believe that there are more friendly way to present the interactivities, for example, I think check box are more suitable than drop-down in this case, and maybe a time interval slider would make the filtering easier.</li> | ||
<li>The tableau workbook well demonstrates the investigation logic and it's very easy to follow! I think better formatting would make it more attractive though. For example, | <li>The tableau workbook well demonstrates the investigation logic and it's very easy to follow! I think better formatting would make it more attractive though. For example, | ||
| − | the overlapping of points and label on | + | the overlapping of points and label on 'point overview' is distracting.</li> |
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| + | <b>Clearity:</b><br> | ||
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| + | <li>For the sunburst diagram, it would be great if a map is presented next to it to assist the perception of the actual location of those routes.</li> | ||
| + | <li>For the network graph in tableau workbook, I think it would be very helpful if there are legends showing the indications of point size and colors. I believe the color indicates different gate types, but the different colors representing the same objects in different workbook tabs is a bit confusing.</li> | ||
| + | <li>For 'pattern of life', is there a better way to include more dimensions (apart from timestamp) into the chart rather than filtering to derive information? </li> | ||
| + | <li>The way you detect the car-ids with long stays is very interesting! However, have you considered that they made multiple entrances to the preserve? Afterall, they are not staying in the preserve for that long. </li> | ||
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| + | It has been such a joy being your study partner and working with you on this assignment. You are very welcome to comment on my work! :)<br> | ||
| + | Thank you, <br> | ||
| + | Bijun | ||
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Yunna Wei - ISSS608 Visual Analytics and Applications_Assignment1
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Your comments are most welcome and valuable. Please leave them here:
Hi Yunna,
Lovely work and interesting interpretation! Please allow me to share my opinions below.
Aesthetic:
- I really like the presentation of sunburst diagram. But I do believe that there are more friendly way to present the interactivities, for example, I think check box are more suitable than drop-down in this case, and maybe a time interval slider would make the filtering easier.
- The tableau workbook well demonstrates the investigation logic and it's very easy to follow! I think better formatting would make it more attractive though. For example, the overlapping of points and label on 'point overview' is distracting.
Clearity:
- For the sunburst diagram, it would be great if a map is presented next to it to assist the perception of the actual location of those routes.
- For the network graph in tableau workbook, I think it would be very helpful if there are legends showing the indications of point size and colors. I believe the color indicates different gate types, but the different colors representing the same objects in different workbook tabs is a bit confusing.
- For 'pattern of life', is there a better way to include more dimensions (apart from timestamp) into the chart rather than filtering to derive information?
- The way you detect the car-ids with long stays is very interesting! However, have you considered that they made multiple entrances to the preserve? Afterall, they are not staying in the preserve for that long.
It has been such a joy being your study partner and working with you on this assignment. You are very welcome to comment on my work! :)
Thank you,
Bijun
