ISSS608 2016-17 T3 Assign HE LINGFEI - Comments

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The author could be contactable at lingfei.he.2016@mitb.smu.edu.sg.

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Comment 1:

Hi Lingfei,

First of all, you really did a great job on this assignment. I really like the way how you annotate in the map, using both shape and colour.My comment on this work is as follows:

  • Nice colour and nice label used to differentiate sensors in the map. But when you use different shape to represent different sensors, you may not be able to compare the population accessed across different type of sensors, i.e: population for camping site 1 and general gate 2
  • For picture HLF 4 axle truck list.png, you may want to highlight those suspicious/unusual paths, such as sensors of "gate", in order fo users to understand your intention in the first glance.

Hope my comment may be helpful for you :)

Best Wishes, Yingbei

Comment 2:

Hi Lingfei,

First of all, you really did a great job on this assignment. I really like the way how you annotate in the map, using both shape and colour.My comment on this work is as follows:

  • Nice colour and nice label used to differentiate sensors in the map. But when you use different shape to represent different sensors, you may not be able to compare the population accessed across different type of sensors, i.e: population for camping site 1 and general gate 2
  • For picture HLF 4 axle truck list.png, you may want to highlight those suspicious/unusual paths, such as sensors of "gate", in order fo users to understand your intention in the first glance.


Hope my comment may be helpful for you :)
Best Wishes,
Yingbei