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Comment 1:
Hi Lingfei,
Well done! The layout of your wiki page is quite comfortable and I really enjoyed reading your well-organized data visualization. There are a few suggestions I can provide as below:
- It is quite inspiring that all the charts have their titles and some highlights as well. I noticed that you used both shape and color to mark different sensors in the route map of Q1, which may make the whole picture messy and confusing. Besides, it would be better you have more detailed interpretations for this fantastic route map.
- As for the route map in section 3.1, it would be better if you mark the two routes with different colors or sizes. What's more, the sensor names are too small to read in the map.
Thanks for your sharing! The variety of chart types and tools you used really amazes me! I have never thought that heatmap and macro can be used into this case. Hope my comments can help also.
Regards,
Chenxin
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Comment 2:
Hi Lingfei,
First of all, you really did a great job on this assignment. I really like the way how you annotate in the map, using both shape and colour.My comment on this work is as follows:
- Nice colour and nice label used to differentiate sensors in the map. But when you use different shape to represent different sensors, you may not be able to compare the population accessed across different type of sensors, i.e: population for camping site 1 and general gate 2
- For picture HLF 4 axle truck list.png, you may want to highlight those suspicious/unusual paths, such as sensors of "gate", in order for users to understand your intention in the first glance.
Hope my comment may be helpful for you :)
Best Wishes,
Yingbei
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