ISSS608 2016-17 T3 Assign HE LINGFEI - Comments

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Comment 1: Hi Lingfei, Well done! The layout of your wiki page is quite comfortable and I really enjoyed reading your well-organized data visualization. There are a few suggestions I can provide as below: It is quite inspiring that all the charts have their titles and some highlights as well. I noticed that you used both shape and color to mark different sensors in the route map of Q1, which may make the whole picture messy and confusing. Besides, it would be better you have more detailed interpretations for this fantastic route map. As for the route map in section 3.1, it would be better if you mark the two routes with different colors or sizes. What's more, the sensor names are too small to read in the map. Thanks for your sharing! The variety of chart types and tools you used really amazes me! I have never thought that heatmap and macro can be used into this case. Hope my comments can help also. Regards, Chenxin